Replies to knoxemerald, page 4
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@knoxemerald goodnight?
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@knoxemerald night
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@knoxemerald Good night!
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@knoxemerald Same as it ever was.
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@knoxemerald if your wondering I didn't start all this Spitfire avatar changes....
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@knoxemerald Evening squire. It's been a while. How do?
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@knoxemerald I had to attend a funeral for my grandfather, who died two weeks ago. :l
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@knoxemerald Alright I guess. Just recovering from a pretty bad week. Doing some drawing at the moment.
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@knoxemerald Hay there! How's it going?
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@knoxemerald Oh yes~ <3
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@knoxemerald HI KNOX, YOU JUST CAME IN AT THE MOST AWKWARD TIME!!
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@knoxemerald Pretty quiet new years day, that's for sure. :p
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@knoxemerald Watching South Park, lookign at pony art, the usual
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@knoxemerald Bony time is best time
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@knoxemerald It's ALWAYS pony time.
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@knoxemerald It's always time for ponies! >:3
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@knoxemerald Night!
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@knoxemerald Goodnight! See you later! :3
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@knoxemerald G'night! Sleep well!
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@knoxemerald Thankie! ♥ and how are you?
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@knoxemerald Prolly not. I have paranoia issuess. Will do as soon as I get the chance though
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@knoxemerald I'll be sure to read the story through... currently, I read the first chapter half way through... I guess I could just tell you if there's anything else I spot next time I catch you around RDN.
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@knoxemerald sorry if my criticisms are going on a little to heavily, I try not to make it too harsh or too commanding, I just try to put what I think can help you.
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@knoxemerald and another thing I noticed, is that you may be using the word Twilight too often, when you could use other descriptors such as "the purple mare", something that doesn't explicitly state a subject's name, but rather alluding to it. Its not to say that you should never use Twilight's name, just a little bit of variance can take you a long way.
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@knoxemerald thanks, sorry if I seem a little long winded, I'm trying to practice a little imagery a bit for my own fan fic.
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