Replies to asvendius, page 4
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@madflavors @asvendius Don't forget to throw me some feedback once you finish reading chapter 4. I want to make sure I'm still doing a good job.
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@asvendius I was thinking that one myself; she still manages to be cute. I was going for the Sonic Radboom at first, but that one was a lot less fitting for the scope of the story
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@asvendius It brings to total words for the story thus far to just under 31000. Also, which image should i use? The Sonic Radboom, Ditzy frolicking in a puddle of radioactive sludge, or the one with Silver Bell at 'Absolutely Everything'?
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@asvendius @madflavors @redtie Tadah! https://docs.google.com/document/d/1PHJBRuswRoruZ0KWHEQgp--l89kC_WJ5NCxNyx_XL6M/edit?hl=en_US Ditzy Doo Chronicles Chapter 4. Be warned, this is a long one, clocking in at over 11k words =O Don't forget to look for the story on Equestria Daily once I send it to Seth
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@asvendius Even more so when you no longer have to squint to see them.
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@asvendius @redtie @madflavors Chapter 4 of the Ditzy Doo Chronicles should be done tomorrow, which will also conclude the first story arc. At that point, I will be sending it to Sethisto for adding to the Side Stories post later this week
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@asvendius Yeah, Project Horizons has some particularly jarring moments. Chapter Six is particularly bad
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@asvendius It is if you follow Kkat's structure at least
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@asvendius https://docs.google.com/document/d/1dCiG5saiIftvQGhBAPQC5nt7WecqFf0VmunSN_4l8PA/edit?hl=en_US Here ya go, chapter 3. That's everything I've got done now, but there's a lot more in the future.
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@asvendius https://docs.google.com/document/d/10toiaLdbMUbKIoiFv2bUbJDrYMsfjZs6sb0NTEcsV4s/edit?hl=en_US Here ya go. The one big thing I'm worried about though is that so much of the 'foreshadowing' in this story is alluding to things that have already happened in the main story <.<
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@asvendius its super intense. Also make sure to read project horizon.
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@asvendius Yikes; get thee to bed! My story is not worth migraines or other head pains D=
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@asvendius *counteract
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@asvendius whoops; my bad
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@asvendius https://docs.google.com/document/d/1tQ_pBzZEqqIDDL4PRaPVuoEQJQkntMD30VXYX2rGZvY/edit?hl=en_US There's the first chapter. Lemme know when you're finished and I'll send you the second (if you have time; the second chapter is mroe than twice as long as the first)
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@asvendius care for more?
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@asvendius Yay =D Here's the intro: https://docs.google.com/document/d/1tQ_pBzZEqqIDDL4PRaPVuoEQJQkntMD30VXYX2rGZvY/edit?hl=en_US I've actually got three chapters done now, but I'll just give you the prologue to start. if you want more, it shall be provided
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@asvendius Speaking of Ditzy, I'm writing my own side story focusing on her time between the apocalypse and the main story. I've been looking for someponies to sample it before I try sending it to EqD.
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@asvendius Hope is my own virtue. It helped my mother beat breast cancer, and it's gonna bring me the happy ending I so desire! (hopefully)
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@asvendius Damn right she is. Plus, she's the only hope for Fluttertree DX
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@asvendius I really hope Xenith pulls through D=
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@asvendius Chapter 37 was pretty ridiculous too; so bloody long, yet so awesome. The revelations of Chapter 42 though... that was intense!
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@asvendius Kkat is really good at yanking heartstrings and propelling emotional roller coasters; chapter 39, nuff said.
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@asvendius I like both the names and the butthurt they've caused.
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@asvendius Spoilers tag please.
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@asvendius AN interesting extrapolation, even if it's not based on anything XD
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@asvendius I was going to shave my nasty neck beard, but then I realized it was November. This is pretty unpleasant.