Replies to asvendius, page 3
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@asvendius heh, ya that was me an hour ago too. FoE takes precedent over EVERYTHING
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@redtie @asvendius @madflavors Whoo! The side Story post finally updated, and the Ditzy Doo Chronicles is now up =D
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@asvendius I was already okay with the mental image of colorful ponies getting totally smashed, as evidenced by my ponysona's name, but I come from a fandom with a long history of doing terrible things to people's childhood memories. :)
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@asvendius Nicely done. However, I do not have another chapter available presently
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@asvendius Read the latest chapter? I always knew things were headed towards a happy ending. >3 Things are getting crazy
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@asvendius Damn right she is >3 I will be forever in her shadow, but I try to be respectful of her stylings via the Ditzy Doo Chronicles
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@asvendius Anyone who is internet and hasn't been on 4chan needs to get their asses over there. It's like, a right of manhood or something.
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@asvendius Then agian, it wouldn't be half as bad as if they found 4chan...
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@asvendius I'm a bad person.
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@asvendius The Vinyl Scratch without lemon is really great. For next time you are drinking magic. http://ur1.ca/6859d
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@asvendius Nah, they're just people
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@asvendius ...No. Of course not.
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@asvendius Nah, we make the world a better place, you just we'd to add a little vigor in what you do sometimes.
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@asvendius ah that sucks. But you are OK now, right? glad you made it back safe.
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@asvendius Yeah, the puking probably helped with the not-being-hung-over. And yeah, I find I get queasy on transit sometimes even when I'm _not_ drunk...
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@redtie That's okay; I figured you were working. Whenever you have time to read it and provide feedback works for me. Got some decent stuff from @madflavors and @asvendius already
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@madflavors @asvendius noticed what May was doing while Ditzy was retrieving the cart; did you?
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@madflavors Hope is good; I like hope. Now before you scamper off, can I ask for some specific input on chapter 4? I got some good feedback from @asvendius and wondered if you had anythign to comment on
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@madflavors That would be pretty slick, but I think the factors for that are 1) sufficient readers 2) Kkat Approval and 3) High Word count. I've got 3 covered no problem (I can see this one breaking 100k words before its finished), 2 I have no idea about, and thus far I've only got you, @asvendius and @redie as readers
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@asvendius here ya go; https://docs.google.com/document/d/1NtPUeO3UK1agTSS63mvU3YcRsUo-yjq5TztX7Vhvtzg/edit?hl=en_US It's short, only serving as a setup for the next set of chapters
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@asvendius If you're interested, i have an 1100 word interlude of the Ditzy Doo Chronicles, setting up my first timeskip to 40 years afetr the apocalypse
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@asvendius Considering that she got to see most of Equestria Destroyed, and one of her best friends dead right in front of her, not to mention her own condition, she wanted a brief reprieve D= She knows the risks as a medical pony, but what she didn't account for was the diminished effect that Dash has on ghouls. This will inevitably lead to higher doses D=
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@asvendius I can live with that. For the record, that balefire phoenix was not Pyrelight XD I realize that too much gore can be off putting, so I put what's needed for impact and no more. I'm glad you like Ditzy's personification. One last thing; did you catch what May was doing when Ditzy left her at the hospital. If not, double check and let me know how it makes you feel
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@asvendius Are there any specific points you'd like to mention? I'm curious as to how certain scenes might make readers feel
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@asvendius I would have appreciated that; my normal beta-reader for spelling and grammar hasn't been present in a while. I think her computer's busted
