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@raiderjoseph Action isn't what I said the issue was. It's the fact that your characters go completely Mary Sue with their powers. While not completely applicable to ponies (There's one that any pony with a cutie mark gets a point for), here's a decent guide to when you may need to dial it back. http://www.ponylandpress.com/ms-test.html I'm more of a [comedy] than [adventure] pony myself, but Alicorns are a bit of a red flag for all genres. They can be written well, but even good authors seem to struggle with them at times.
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I see YouTube decided that bar at the bottom wasn't annoying enough and have made it literally twice the size. GREAT.
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@raiderjoseph Gee.. I forgot how much I forgot to upload, there's not much more there at the moment than trying to draw a decent avatar. http://eaglehooves.deviantart.com/gallery/?catpath=scraps Seeing your whole plan, I think I'd be in way over my head. I'll try a few panels if you give me specifics, but I don't think I'll be up to expectation, and I don't have that much time to commit. Also, consider revising the ending a bit. It goes really Mary Sue, really fast. I think you'll turn a lot of ponies off really fast, as it's written.
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@raiderjoseph What do you need I can pony art