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Just got a captcha that said "discord love" ...
Thursday, 01-Mar-12 17:01:47 UTC from web-
@minti Who doesn't love Discord?
Thursday, 01-Mar-12 17:04:53 UTC from web -
@minti Dischord <3 ? :D
Thursday, 01-Mar-12 17:34:42 UTC from web-
@forestrain http://ur1.ca/8gkn7 This is my poem so far.. It's taking me a long time, but I'm enjoying the process. Any recommendations are welcome, esp. formatting and such.. I've never written song lyrics.
Thursday, 01-Mar-12 17:37:48 UTC from web-
@pony Wow, this is so art! ;p Good rhyming, and very description -- but it's not formatted like a song yet. Is there a chorus? A hook? Are you planning on making that long paragraph at the end a chorus, and the rest verses?
Thursday, 01-Mar-12 20:14:14 UTC from web-
@forestrain YOOOOOOOOOOOU
Thursday, 01-Mar-12 20:15:48 UTC from web -
@forestrain Thanks! I do love descriptive language. Yes, I was thinking the long paragraph could be a chorus. If it's not too much trouble, I'm thinking I may leave it to you to change it into a more song-worthy form somehow once I'm finished. As it is, I was thinking I'd write 4 more verses (doubling the length of the poem), and then repeat the chorus once more. Or (instead of 4 verses, chorus, 4 verses, chorus) I could do 3 verses, chorus, 3 verses, chorus, 3 verses, chorus. Do you have a preference? Also, where do you think I should try and incorporate the hook? I like the idea of working one in, I'm just not sure where it might fit best.
Sunday, 04-Mar-12 03:37:27 UTC from web-
@pony Cool, whatever you'd like! Not sure how I'm going to musicize it yet. >.> But hook would probably be best right before chorus.
Sunday, 04-Mar-12 03:41:12 UTC from web-
@forestrain Sweet. Thanks.
Sunday, 04-Mar-12 03:48:55 UTC from web
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@forestrain enjoy your Dischord! I'll ttyl
Thursday, 01-Mar-12 17:40:47 UTC from web
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