Pony (pony)'s status on Sunday, 04-Mar-12 03:37:27 UTC
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@forestrain Thanks! I do love descriptive language. Yes, I was thinking the long paragraph could be a chorus. If it's not too much trouble, I'm thinking I may leave it to you to change it into a more song-worthy form somehow once I'm finished. As it is, I was thinking I'd write 4 more verses (doubling the length of the poem), and then repeat the chorus once more. Or (instead of 4 verses, chorus, 4 verses, chorus) I could do 3 verses, chorus, 3 verses, chorus, 3 verses, chorus. Do you have a preference? Also, where do you think I should try and incorporate the hook? I like the idea of working one in, I'm just not sure where it might fit best.
