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Off to tell kids what to do. LAter guys.
Thursday, 26-Jun-14 01:14:17 UTC from web-
Thursday, 26-Jun-14 01:14:49 UTC from web
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Thursday, 26-Jun-14 01:14:56 UTC from web
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@metaltao now read it metaltao
Thursday, 26-Jun-14 01:18:14 UTC from web-
@lunaloverchay XD OH is this non-fiction? UM...... I am not sure how to react to this.... just don't obbsess over anything other wise it gets unhealthy and can lead to delusions and even irrational thought. NOW THEN! I am touched by what you said about me really XD um... hold on a moment I will post another correction :L
Thursday, 26-Jun-14 01:20:38 UTC from web-
@metaltao no it is a fanfiction base off of myself
Thursday, 26-Jun-14 01:23:32 UTC from web-
@lunaloverchay OH I understand now XD Go ahead and pour your heart out and soul!
Thursday, 26-Jun-14 01:24:29 UTC from web-
@metaltao read the chapter one now
Thursday, 26-Jun-14 01:29:24 UTC from web-
@lunaloverchay Hey, kid, how old are you?
Thursday, 26-Jun-14 01:31:14 UTC from web-
@metaltao 14
Thursday, 26-Jun-14 01:31:27 UTC from web-
@lunaloverchay derp
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@lunaloverchay I want to hug you right now man!
Thursday, 26-Jun-14 01:31:53 UTC from web-
@metaltao :0
Thursday, 26-Jun-14 01:32:19 UTC from web-
@lunaloverchay Change "One day" To "One night" it will make more chronological sense and will also add to your diction.
Thursday, 26-Jun-14 01:32:56 UTC from web -
@lunaloverchay Are you comfortable explaining in more detail what happened to you! I can relate!
Thursday, 26-Jun-14 01:34:09 UTC from web-
@metaltao read it now
Thursday, 26-Jun-14 01:39:08 UTC from web-
@lunaloverchay I was talking about the "One day I hade a dream" Change that into "One night, I had a dream" I FEEL WRONG DOEING THIS XD but buck it... lettuce do it
Thursday, 26-Jun-14 01:41:26 UTC from web-
@metaltaltao OK
Thursday, 26-Jun-14 01:43:08 UTC from web-
@lunaloverchay You're going far kid.
Thursday, 26-Jun-14 01:44:19 UTC from web-
@metaltao read it now :)
Thursday, 26-Jun-14 01:45:31 UTC from web -
@metaltao read it now
Thursday, 26-Jun-14 01:59:17 UTC from web-
@lunaloverchay Now, there are many words you could use to change "Then she walked up to me and ask my name i told her my name." Now "i told her my name." Could be changed to say something less redundant, for example! "Then she walked up to me and ask my name, I told her in kind. 'My name is Chay Vroman...'" ELICIT emotions from your words! I am surprised, you seem to learn fast
Thursday, 26-Jun-14 02:02:14 UTC from web-
@metaltao im a fast learner
Thursday, 26-Jun-14 02:03:19 UTC from web-
@lunaloverchay Good for you! I am going to be a bit slow now, I am playing a game with friends! I will check back every now and then! so don't worryy!
Thursday, 26-Jun-14 02:04:16 UTC from web-
@metaltao You may want to revise "I watch season one episode 1&2" to past tense (Or was it called participle? Oh well semantics don't matter now) Should I tell you exactly what to change or should I send a line that I found and then you fix it to your content and style?
Thursday, 26-Jun-14 02:13:37 UTC from web
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@lunaloverchay Is english your primary laguage?
Thursday, 26-Jun-14 02:08:14 UTC from web-
@metaltao yes
Thursday, 26-Jun-14 02:11:40 UTC from web
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@lunaloverchay Here is a song I thought Of #NSFW http://rainbowdash.net/url/765744
Thursday, 26-Jun-14 01:45:25 UTC from web-
@metaltao i alreadly heard before but thanks
Thursday, 26-Jun-14 01:46:28 UTC from web-
@lunaloverchay XD that is alright!
Thursday, 26-Jun-14 01:47:11 UTC from web
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@metaltao i thought of one everybody wants to go to equestria
Thursday, 26-Jun-14 01:47:07 UTC from web-
@lunaloverchay True, thre are people who at least want to!
Thursday, 26-Jun-14 01:47:45 UTC from web-
@metaltao read it now
Thursday, 26-Jun-14 01:49:47 UTC from web-
@lunaloverchay OH and add the fact that I am helping you in the description instead of the story, it will feel out of place and ruin any feels you are trying to mold in people! You don't have to eliminate me from the story, just move the fact that I helped edit to the desc
Thursday, 26-Jun-14 01:54:00 UTC from web
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@lunaloverchay "One year later in the summer I join a site" you need to punctuate! (BE A PUNC) You may want to add a comma between later and in and add another comma between summer and I. and make join Joined instead
Thursday, 26-Jun-14 01:50:24 UTC from web
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@lunaloverchay But good job making them all night! It IS Luna after all XD (and I see you relate to Luna on a PERSONAL level, both being missunderstood and then making a terrible decision to join the darkness but due to the help of your gfamily, you recovered and reggretted your decision)
Thursday, 26-Jun-14 01:43:40 UTC from web
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@foxgopher Bye man. Teach 'em what's good.
Thursday, 26-Jun-14 01:19:04 UTC from web
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