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ok ill resay, it, Its SUPER good, i like the ditzy/daring doo sister connection, good characters, vary your adjectives more, and you spel daring wrong once in the prologue, otherwise, rather incredible fanfic :D
Thursday, 21-Jun-12 20:01:40 UTC from web-
@newpatrol ok thanks alot :)
Thursday, 21-Jun-12 20:03:39 UTC from web
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