NewPatrol (newpatrol)'s status on Thursday, 21-Jun-12 20:01:40 UTC

  1. NewPatrol NewPatrol

    ok ill resay, it, Its SUPER good, i like the ditzy/daring doo sister connection, good characters, vary your adjectives more, and you spel daring wrong once in the prologue, otherwise, rather incredible fanfic :D

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