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Friday, 03-Jun-11 00:35:19 UTC from web
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@miloth So, what did you think?
Friday, 03-Jun-11 00:36:05 UTC from web-
@nvrrmbr It was awesome, except I just felt a feeling of rush through the whole story, I mean it happened so fast, the way Chris met Isaac Clark and instantly followed him as if they had been friends forever. I just think you should have added in a event where they start getting closer before going on an adventure as soon as you wake up and jump into the action, I mean the story was action after action, I mean its not a bad thing but there should be a more flow to things, like a rising event, then a event where things start to calm down. I mean I only disliked that Gabriel started to attack every 5 minutes. It was a pretty good story it just that the should be more events in between stuff, I mean meeting someone for just a few days and then deciding to bear a child with a friend you just met, seems kind of off, like it needed a time for those two characters to bond a bit more before doing so. But Great job on it. Better then what I could try and do.
Friday, 03-Jun-11 00:46:21 UTC from web-
@miloth Yeah, hardware limitations accounted for most of those problems. I wrote it entirely on my trusty iTouch and I broke the length limit, so I had to shorten it.
Friday, 03-Jun-11 00:49:11 UTC from web-
Friday, 03-Jun-11 00:50:20 UTC from web
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@miloth But... Okay. I will shed a single tear and leave it in the dust.
Friday, 03-Jun-11 00:51:31 UTC from web-
Friday, 03-Jun-11 00:52:21 UTC from web
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@miloth Okay, will do! That will take a long time.
Friday, 03-Jun-11 00:54:09 UTC from web-
@nvrrmbr *sits down and waits* Btw, I found a horrendous OC story of mine for some other fandom, I made years ago when I had horrible grammar. Wanna Read it before I try and fix it or after?
Friday, 03-Jun-11 00:56:13 UTC from web-
@miloth Both please!
Friday, 03-Jun-11 00:57:13 UTC from web-
@nvrrmbr SHIELD YOUR EYES! I was 9 when I made this I think and it was never finished due to apathy. http://tinyurl.com/Milothhorribleoc
Friday, 03-Jun-11 01:02:08 UTC from web-
@miloth It's good, but the cliff hanger at the end is really annoying me!
Friday, 03-Jun-11 01:03:59 UTC from web-
@nvrrmbr are you serious? I started almost all my sentences with my name! I didn't have much creativity back then, but I'll see what I can do about it now, and I must be rusty as a nail.
Friday, 03-Jun-11 01:05:32 UTC from web-
@miloth What was I doing when I was really young? Umm... When I was in first grade, I wrote a 7-page story about a robotic whale.
Friday, 03-Jun-11 01:07:02 UTC from web-
@nvrrmbr uhhhhh, I don't suppose you know how it goes? The longest thing I made when I was young was a 3-4 page application to be a mod on some forum and even I hated that app and I still got accepted...
Friday, 03-Jun-11 01:08:13 UTC from web-
@miloth Umm... I had some pretty terrible hand writing back then, so I can hardly read it, and I lost the last two pages, so it's very incomplete.
Friday, 03-Jun-11 01:09:24 UTC from web-
@nvrrmbr reminds me of some fast paced do this and then jump right into climax pokemon essay I made for 3rd-4th grade.
Friday, 03-Jun-11 01:10:26 UTC from web-
@miloth Really, which Pokemons were in it?
Friday, 03-Jun-11 01:11:37 UTC from web-
Friday, 03-Jun-11 01:13:37 UTC from web
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@miloth Are those your favorites? My favorite is Tropius :3
Friday, 03-Jun-11 01:15:42 UTC from web-
@nvrrmbr this was before 4th generation was even out. Plus Tylphosion was my first and favorite pokemon, but I got Cinccino, and Whimsicott. I don't know why i'm interested into the cute and fluffy ones.
Friday, 03-Jun-11 01:18:45 UTC from web-
@miloth 4th generation is the best, and My Little Pony proved that. :3
Friday, 03-Jun-11 01:19:46 UTC from web-
@nvrrmbr I see what you did there. Another victory for you. And something tells me having rdn refresh on 5 is a bad idea.
Friday, 03-Jun-11 01:21:02 UTC from web-
@miloth I just manually refresh. Stupid Internet Explorer!
Friday, 03-Jun-11 01:22:16 UTC from web-
Friday, 03-Jun-11 01:23:19 UTC from web
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@nvrrmbr ewwwwwww, ie, That why I switched to Firefox, which ended me up to use Google Chrome, and soon....
Friday, 03-Jun-11 01:23:30 UTC from web-
@miloth I'm just too lazy to switch to Firefox.
Friday, 03-Jun-11 01:24:17 UTC from web-
Friday, 03-Jun-11 01:25:12 UTC from web
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@miloth Well, I have "Project Alpha" To work on, Finals to study for, writer's challenge level 7 to finish, and now Twisted Wolf to work on.
Friday, 03-Jun-11 01:26:49 UTC from web-
Friday, 03-Jun-11 01:29:33 UTC from web
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@miloth Thanks!
Friday, 03-Jun-11 01:32:01 UTC from web-
Friday, 03-Jun-11 01:34:25 UTC from web
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Friday, 03-Jun-11 01:09:35 UTC from web
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@furyshy Sane? With a nickname like "furyshy"?
Friday, 03-Jun-11 01:11:21 UTC from web-
@nvrrmbr Yep, not something somepony would expect
Friday, 03-Jun-11 01:13:59 UTC from web
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