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1. Pony

   @snowlynx That's as good a method as any imo!

   Monday, 15-Apr-13 12:53:51 UTC from web
   • Gabe Canter

     @snowlynx OH MY GOD

     Monday, 15-Apr-13 11:47:29 UTC in context
   • Pony

     @snowlynx what's the name of that fic?

     Monday, 15-Apr-13 12:10:45 UTC in context
   • Pony

     @snowlynx o.o you did? nice!

     Monday, 15-Apr-13 12:29:55 UTC in context
   • Pony

     @snowlynx what makes you say it's not good enough?

     Monday, 15-Apr-13 12:32:48 UTC in context
   • Pony

     @snowlynx For it to be that good you'd have to build up to it. What you have so far is good for just that. It's on track to being great.

     Monday, 15-Apr-13 12:35:02 UTC in context
   • Pony

     @snowlynx I wouldn't worry about making it better really. but yeah it's obviously really excerpt length and not story length. You could give it an intro and set up the reasons for Rarity wanting to start a relationship, etc.

     Monday, 15-Apr-13 12:38:56 UTC in context
   • Pony

     @snowlynx there are lots of ways to make it longer though.. that's just one

     Monday, 15-Apr-13 12:39:42 UTC in context