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@hoit21 Killer ^^ Keep an eye out for Stolen Harmony on EqD as well; I plan on submitting it in the near future =D
Monday, 01-Aug-11 06:19:58 UTC from web-
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@hoit21 Totally awesome, how are you?
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@hoit21 I know! The only thing that keeps me alive is speculations about the second season that seems so far from the horizon!
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@hoit21 For me the heat has been worse than the lack of ponies; fanfics, art and other brony stuff has kept me satisfied =D
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@hoit21 That and totally awesome fanart!
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@hoit21 Love EqD. Trying to tweak my current fanfic project to be worthy of 6 stars =D
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@hoit21 Work in progress. Currently got three whole parts completed at 7-8k words each, not sure how long it will be in total, but have the whole story planned out =D Title is 'Stolen Harmony' >3
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@hoit21 I've been writing for a few years now (mostly fanfic with a couple original projects) and i know how much it bites when the creative juices aren't flowing ><
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@hoit21 Well, for a fellow struggling writer, here's a sneak peek https://docs.google.com/document/d/1eqNAo8WJjo8Xbqevmdyj5Chlcvd5YZc58V2kpUtYKN4/edit?hl=en_US
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@hoit21 I'm a bit of a shameless self promoter, but that's only because the thing that drives me to write more than anything is peopel enbjoying my work
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@hoit21 Sweet. I don't mind taking a look at yours if you've got it on Google Docs. Least I can do ^^
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@hoit21 Which Doctor are you modeling Whoof after? Just so I can get my bearings
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@hoit21 LOVE Doctor Who, so no worries there. I even included him in a short story as part of a compilation I did.
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@hoit21 All respectable Doctors in certain fields (although Tennant takes the cake for me). Here's a bit more of my work; I used 10 as the base. https://docs.google.com/document/d/16d3cb8SWdD2ZQpMOH0-ZY_vWdm3q8KQqrRIgjqDZ2yY/edit?hl=en_US
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@hoit21 Doctor Whoof; as part of the origins of Ditzy Doo/ Derpy Hooves ^^
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@hoit21 Reading's a good hobby; online or out of a book, it matters not. Now I'm just about finished with what you gave me =D
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@hoit21 You finished it already did you?
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@hoit21 Spiffy; characterization is always the trickiest part of writing I find. I was thinking of doing a whole Whoof story if it ended up being well recieved
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@hoit21 Stolen Harmony comes first; I try to keep to one project at a time. Now then, as for your work allow me to offer this advice; the pacing is a bit too fast, meaning that the characters are jumping around form one place to another with little in depth description or transition. The technical aspects of the writing are fine, but my main issue is the relatively minimal amount of description you offer. It's difficult to get into a scene if you don't know what's going on around the characters. That said, I have just the thing to help you out. There's a writer's training ground over on Ponychan that I've found quite helpful in devloping my skills. Link in a sec
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@hoit21 For you: http://www.ponychan.net/chan/fic/res/32566.html I wish you the best of luck on your project
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@hoit21 Give some of your writing to them in a post and they'll be able to cater more specific advice for you =D
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@hoit21 Here's the rest of my Pony work as featured on EqD http://www.equestriadaily.com/2011/06/story-lower-deck-chronicles.html Feel free to peruse at your leisure
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