nope (pegasisterforever)'s status on Monday, 14-May-12 05:08:22 UTC
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@hakupony Thanks for the critique! If you care, the extra characters are from a video game, (heavy rain) and the point of the fic is to follow the plot of the video game through the main character's drug induced dreams. It isn't very serious at all, and I guess I should have mentioned Heavy Rain first. Fluttershy didn't have to be reminded, The first part of the game uses a really stupid note to introduce the protagonist's (Ethan Mars, substituted with Fluttershy, due to his strange, awkward manner of behavior) Wife, (Substitued with Ellegrace, who really isn't important.) Pinkie Pie has a smaller brother, due to the fact that Pinkie Pie substitute's Jason, who gets hit by a car in the very 3rd scene. The main protagonist in this story is Norman Jayden, an FBI agent who solved the case of the "Origami Killer" which he is dreaming of in Pony Terms. :D @cajunbrony23 only needed to read it because he has played Heavy Rain IRL. :D
