The white void (hakupony)'s status on Saturday, 02-Jun-12 14:08:58 UTC
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@cajunbrony23 The third part just seems a bit odd based on where the lines end. The last part is nearly perfect - the onl thing I could nag about is the "down". In this one, you use the potential of language much better and it is easy to relate on what feelings and thoughts you want to express. Even though I disagree with some of the thingsyou want to express here, you did really well.
