Daniel (redtie)'s status on Wednesday, 19-Oct-11 04:09:21 UTC
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@tequilasunrise Also about your fanfic. Its got an issue called "talking heads". (don't worry everyone deals with that problem. I used to do it all the time) Basically when you have a scene with two characters talking...and its all they do really. A suggestion would be to try and show aspects of a characters personality or intention without the character speaking. "Show, don't tell"
