Weenie Wanga Langa Genghis Khan (flaxx)'s status on Saturday, 14-May-11 22:23:36 UTC
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@amadman There, finished reading it. I liked it, especially the beginning, it was touching. However, the grammar might need some work. You know, capital letters, commas and so on. Otherwise it good. I did notice that you repeated "It was near midnight in Equestria" three times at the very beginning, though.
