Replies to pegasisterforever, page 3
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@pegasisterforever damn, well I wasnt able to show up, study guides and all
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@pegasisterforever ok. What does the other students think of these meetings? :3
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@pegasisterforever my camra shoots in 240p video with decent aoudio
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@pegasisterforever Is he at your school? :o cool! :D
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@pegasisterforever eeyup
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@pegasisterforever yea. A little less violent, but still, prettty similar. So, How did your singing go? ^_^
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@pegasisterforever hug tags are limited to you imagnatin watch #superawsmoelolnotreallloljkiloveyousomuchthisistoolonglolhugs
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@pegasisterforever it sounds an awful lot like my littlebrother... I know what you mean... #BigHug
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@pegasisterforever well hows this #hugstomakeyoufeelbetter
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@pegasisterforever Oh. Are you alright now? :( #cuddles
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@pegasisterforever well, I dont know we dont have that kinda relationship. we just like to talk it out. calmly
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@pegasisterforever come on, your sisters, you love each other, I mean its not like she bannished you to the moon like celestia did to her sister
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@pegasisterforever what? Your mother, or your teacher? D:
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@pegasisterforever Ignore her, tell her to knock it off. not in that order.
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@pegasisterforever ouch, it'll be ok,
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@pegasisterforever NO I AM NOT
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@pegasisterforever you could get back at them with some startegically placed cellophane
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@pegasisterforever k bye
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@pegasisterforever Your PARENTS said that?
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@pegasisterforever oh, what do they know?
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@pegasisterforever WHY? D:
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@pegasisterforever #hugs What happened?
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@pegasisterforever why?
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@pegasisterforever You got me with chapter two. I thought it was just really bad writing but it was just a dream. But seriously, dreams tend to be strange but this one had very little to do with what really is in the show. Fluttershys best friend who we never seen before (since Fluttershy is the kind of Pony who makes so many friends) - a younger brother of Pinky Pie we never met before even though she would introduce everypoy to him if she had one and Princess Celestria graduating school and Fluttershy must be reminded to take care of the animals. Not to the part outside of the dream: why would I care for those people? If you don't start building up some tension, I'd not read further. It really pains me to be so rude but even though you do have a decent writing style, I just can't start caring for your story. The only thing I really would want to know after two chapters is why dreamworld-ponyville was destroyed.
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@pegasisterforever I'm so stupid lol
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@pegasisterforever No problem. I'm always glad if somepony really wants constructive criticism - because I can't keep my mouth shut.
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@pegasisterforever lol all caps name, if any I find it a bit that pikie pie has a younger brother. in the show she had 2 sisters, but I can forgive this for 2 resons, 1. you said he was her adopted brother. 2. its a fan fic, so continuity dosnt matter
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@pegasisterforever Would you provide me with a link to your fanfic?
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@pegasisterforever lol, I like both chapters so far,
