Replies to brass, page 30
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@sarramore the herd grows!
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@sarramore I spotted it the other day whilst looking for mine, whilst mine has only been active one day. I find for a small time story 45 views quite respectable. http://www.fimfiction.net/story/233/ <- Mine
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@sarramore It's one of the highest rated as well.
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@sarramore Yeah I noticed :P Were as for me I tend to put in TOO much detail. Especially in *Cough* Certain scenes of interest *cough* But I can trim it all down after finetuning it a few times.
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@sarramore It's a good read, but I think you need to look at maybe putting in some more detail about events. It's kind of jumpy in places as well, maybe focus a little more on the smaller fine details. Just my two cents :)
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@sarramore Indeed it is.
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@sarramore I spotted it on the first Chapter, 3rd paragraph. You have The manor house the was huge home of a grouchy brown coated stallion called Thorn. One to many the's :P
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@sarramore You don't mind if I point out and mistakes I see do you? I have a annoying habit of finding many if not all mistakes. It was a plus side of being a beta tester
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@sarramore I've had anothr brainstorm, so I am trying to plot this one out unlike my other two projects. Hopefully focusing on just this one, I seem to have it all done. Basic story and so on. One sec
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@sarramore Join the club, doing the exact something here.
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@sarramore you must make a compilation of all the short pinkie pie songs... Make them sound like they were supposed to ne in one piece.
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@sarramore happy brony day to you too
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@sarramore happy brony day?
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@sarramore g'night!
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@sarramore I LEAVE HERE FOR AN HOUR AND PONIES ARE TURNING INTO ONIONS! I ALWAYS MISS THE GOOD STUFF!!
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@sarramore GIANT ONION GIANT ONION!
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@sarramore You have to register your mouth as a lethal weapon till you brush your teeth...
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@sarramore I don't know, maybe you turn into a giant onion?
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@sarramore What'a up!? c:
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@sarramore ooooo fun times. did ya do well?
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@sarramore how things been going for ya?
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@sarramore Just enjoy yourself and everything will pull together~!
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@sarramore Fun stuff!! make the best of a bad morning with a good evening, okay!?
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@sarramore I've not been there. It's really far away. :O
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@sarramore Yeah just ignore me, that's ok C:
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@sarramore What's up!? c=
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@sarramore Sounds fun. :) Which beach?
