Locke (l0x0r)
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!writeponies I was wondering if I could get some feedback on a fanfic I just wrote. I'd really appreciate it if I could get some critiques on how to write better. http://www.fanfiction.net/s/6902779/1/
Thursday, 14-Apr-11 03:09:01 UTC from web -
@krassmcwriter !writeponies I left you a review. I hope that it wasn't too harsh, I'm in a bit of a surly mood. Hopefully it's somewhat helpful.
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@chistery !writeponies I read that one back when EQD posted all the contest entries. I thought it was really good personally, no grammatical errors I saw, and great pacing. The ending was kind of a downer though. It would be great if you wrote a sequel with more happiness involved. I'd go into more depth, but wouldn't want to spoil it further for those who've yet to read it.
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can someone give me a link to the /co/ general? It's not on the front page and I fail at the archiver.
Tuesday, 05-Apr-11 22:57:59 UTC from web -
@fluttershy 2 pre op ponies and 2 post op ponies huh
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@thelastgherkin Pony Google
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@pinkiefan gratz on ding