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  1. nicole manriquez nicole manriquez

    oh im doing a fanfic for one of my OC's and ideas?

    Sunday, 03-Feb-13 03:53:51 UTC from web
    1. Matt Matt

      @nikkie2898 Oh man, there's so much you can do, it's hard to suggest just one.

      Sunday, 03-Feb-13 03:55:06 UTC from web
      1. nicole manriquez nicole manriquez

        @zeldatra im doing one on a pony named Eris shes like discord but way more awesome and stronger and i just got to the part were discord is arguing with celestia due to her saying that this "great evil" was stronger than discord

        Sunday, 03-Feb-13 03:56:22 UTC from web
        1. Matt Matt

          @nikkie2898 Ok, stop right there. I'm really sorry, I don't like giving negative feedback, but... that sounds kinda Mary Sue-ish, doesn't it?

          Sunday, 03-Feb-13 03:58:00 UTC from web
          1. nicole manriquez nicole manriquez

            @zeldatra mary sue?

            Sunday, 03-Feb-13 03:58:14 UTC from web
          2. nicole manriquez nicole manriquez

            @zeldatra oh and its alright any feedback is good feedback

            Sunday, 03-Feb-13 03:58:34 UTC from web
            1. Matt Matt

              @nikkie2898 A Mary Sue is an OC who is better than everyone in every way, and they're typically negatively received by the fandom. One popular example is Nyx, the foal incarnate of Nightmare Moon. She is classified as a sue because of her ability to get Twilight to do whatever she asks.

              Sunday, 03-Feb-13 04:02:48 UTC from web
              1. Caim Caim

                @zeldatra DM, would be a mary Sue.

                Sunday, 03-Feb-13 04:03:23 UTC from web
    2. nicole manriquez nicole manriquez

      no not pron huh

      Sunday, 03-Feb-13 03:58:55 UTC from web
    3. Caim Caim

      @thatonestocking Time to write one about Michael Phelps.

      Sunday, 03-Feb-13 03:58:57 UTC from web
    4. Caim Caim

      @thatonestocking She has a body :<

      Sunday, 03-Feb-13 04:00:43 UTC from web
    5. Caim Caim

      @thatonestocking http://ur1.ca/coooq

      Sunday, 03-Feb-13 04:02:45 UTC from web
    6. Caim Caim

      @thatonestocking But I drew it!

      Sunday, 03-Feb-13 04:03:54 UTC from web
    7. Caim Caim

      @thatonestocking Wehh

      Sunday, 03-Feb-13 04:05:33 UTC from web
    8. Matt Matt

      @thatonestocking Yeah, that too.

      Sunday, 03-Feb-13 04:05:34 UTC from web
    9. Caim Caim

      @thatonestocking http://ur1.ca/coopr

      Sunday, 03-Feb-13 04:07:58 UTC from web
    10. Caim Caim

      @thatonestocking A picture my friend Joe drew.

      Sunday, 03-Feb-13 04:10:40 UTC from web
    11. Caim Caim

      @thatonestocking Joe is the best, you're mad.

      Sunday, 03-Feb-13 04:11:32 UTC from web
    12. Caim Caim

      @thatonestocking You are so angry, your butt is literally red.

      Sunday, 03-Feb-13 04:13:26 UTC from web
    13. Caim Caim

      @thatonestocking Oh baby. (More quality Joe.) http://ur1.ca/cooqt

      Sunday, 03-Feb-13 04:14:49 UTC from web
    14. Caim Caim

      @thatonestocking Joe is the best, he's dying for our country.

      Sunday, 03-Feb-13 04:16:02 UTC from web