The white void (hakupony)'s status on Wednesday, 13-Jun-12 18:51:37 UTC
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@thunderboltpony plural. If you talk aboutmore than one pony. Sorry, my keayboard sucks and I'm to lazy to doublecheck what I wrote. However, the chapter was interesting because we had an action scene and daringg doo is all about action scenes. When she read the books I thought to myself "This is realistic in how an archeologist would act but daring doo seems more like she just jums into danger. But hey, it turned out fine. But there is still one thing I liked about the first chater more: open questions. I don't have any which would tempt me to read the next chapter. You really did that good during the prologue.