Crusader 8 (princelypublictimeline)'s status on Monday, 25-Jun-12 18:17:39 UTC
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@cajunbrony23 Make sure you get someone to look over for spelling and grammar before posting it. Aside from that, I think something that jumps out as unusual is MLP establishes her as a fictitious character, and your story features Daring Do interacting with real ponies. This is something that must be done with caution.