MetalTao (metaltao)'s status on Friday, 07-Aug-15 01:47:44 UTC
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@bobo I will be frank.. It is a bit spastic. I see it is not the entirety of the song, but a small chassis, so I will refrain from more harsher Criticism. To me, it feels like the song has a conflict, like, it doesn't yet know what it wants to be and switches between them rapidly. But the beginning, I am seeing a solid ground work. Something tangible. It just falls apart for me later. But... It regains some ground in the ending.
