Gherkin ☑️ (thelastgherkin)'s status on Monday, 01-Feb-16 22:33:42 UTC

Gherkin ☑️ Narwhal

@northernnarwhal Great stuff! Scene and staging descriptions were (mostly) deliberate omissions since it was written for Transformers fans and anything more than vague descriptions of which Decepticons are involved would give away bits of humour, the punchline in particular (since one of the few things we actually know about Misfire is that he's never hit a shot in his life, and the rest of the fic was just a really long setup to that line). But apart from that, that's some valuable tips if I ever want to start writing for "entry-level" fans. Thanks!