Crash (lightningcrash)'s status on Wednesday, 19-Oct-11 11:14:07 UTC
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@rhetoricalpony Alright... Okay. I've got an idea or two for you. Let's kind of change the setting first. Place it in a battle outside of one of the colonies. So not only could you expand on the rescue, but you would also set up what would occur next... Have something go wrong with the escape (possible part 2 title). Maybe someone gets injured along the way or something. But make it so their route of exit is blocked or somehow no longer an option. Force the squad down onto the colony below, where the covenent are already staging a planet-scale invasion. Maybe have the beleagured squad meet up with more troops, a squad that's under heavy fire (under command of Apple Jack??). Try taking it from there.
