Crash (lightningcrash)'s status on Wednesday, 19-Oct-11 11:30:08 UTC
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@rhetoricalpony Okay... So Twiliight Sparkle is basicly the Covenent's mane focus? Hmmm..... Maybe we can mesh both of our ideas... Try taking it with my idea, because it really doesn't change your opening scene that much. Once they get to the ground, have them do the whole "rescue the squad" thing. Then after the fray is done, have like a surprised meeting between Twi & AJ. Start to leak information about the past from there, little questions from Apple Jack or something like that to get Twilight to explain some of it. Maybe slowly get the remainder of the mane six slowly back together, making it the only way to stave off the Covenent. Kind of put that irony in where Twi must do exactly the opposite of what she wanted. I'm sure you'll do what's right for your fic, though.