Sir E. Hooves III (eaglehooves)'s status on Friday, 21-Oct-11 14:13:00 UTC
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@raiderjoseph Action isn't what I said the issue was. It's the fact that your characters go completely Mary Sue with their powers. While not completely applicable to ponies (There's one that any pony with a cutie mark gets a point for), here's a decent guide to when you may need to dial it back. http://www.ponylandpress.com/ms-test.html I'm more of a [comedy] than [adventure] pony myself, but Alicorns are a bit of a red flag for all genres. They can be written well, but even good authors seem to struggle with them at times.
