Replies to raiderjoseph, page 4
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@raiderjoseph Eeeenope.
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@raiderjoseph yea i hear ya there god knows i hate those shows...
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@raiderjoseph lol I'm going to Hawaii this December =D
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@raiderjoseph My friend lives there, he's a primary school teacher. ^^
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@raiderjoseph I'm in San Francisco , so that's a no ....
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@raiderjoseph im not there ...sorry.
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@raiderjoseph It's not something you have to follow to a T, but it's something to conceder. Some good fics have failed the test, so it's not definitive, but if you fail it spectacularly you're probably playing with fire, and as a first work (correct me if I'm wrong) that's setting you up for a challenge.
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@raiderjoseph Action isn't what I said the issue was. It's the fact that your characters go completely Mary Sue with their powers. While not completely applicable to ponies (There's one that any pony with a cutie mark gets a point for), here's a decent guide to when you may need to dial it back. http://www.ponylandpress.com/ms-test.html I'm more of a [comedy] than [adventure] pony myself, but Alicorns are a bit of a red flag for all genres. They can be written well, but even good authors seem to struggle with them at times.
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@raiderjoseph Gee.. I forgot how much I forgot to upload, there's not much more there at the moment than trying to draw a decent avatar. http://eaglehooves.deviantart.com/gallery/?catpath=scraps Seeing your whole plan, I think I'd be in way over my head. I'll try a few panels if you give me specifics, but I don't think I'll be up to expectation, and I don't have that much time to commit. Also, consider revising the ending a bit. It goes really Mary Sue, really fast. I think you'll turn a lot of ponies off really fast, as it's written.
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@raiderjoseph Sounds interesting. I'm way the hay overworked, but if there's something specific you want I could try my hoof at it over my long weekend. Not a great artist, though. My dA sketchpad, while almost never updated, will give you an idea of where in the learning process I am.
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@raiderjoseph Welcome to RDN newpony!
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@raiderjoseph Nice to meet you too. Directed here for the NC meetup, I presume?
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@raiderjoseph Not much, how about you? Also; welcome to the herd!
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@raiderjoseph Welcome to RDN. WE hope you enjoy yourself here :)
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@raiderjoseph Welcome to RDN , Enjoy your stay! =)
