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@abigpony Hmm, well I personally wouldn't say too sappy, just that the moments where try to convey it they do poorly and are hit and miss. Depending on how you wrote it, maybe that's the better option. A review would probably be taken into consideration more by its author if it points out the issues instead of just, "This is like really, really bad as in super bad."
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How's everypony doing? Been reading <.<
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@tenmihara A little sleepy. How are you?
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@pinhooves Probably gonna go to bed when I finished reading myself
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@pinhooves Or maybe rewatch the new episode now that I've browsed its tropes page. Brought up a few interesting points that might make the experience more enjoyable if I catch them
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@tenmihara @phillipjayfry Hiya, you two!!
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@abigpony Project Horizons; What's My Little Dashie?
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@princessweetiebelle Your Avatar changes every time I see it
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@tenmihara I am an indecisive pony today. xD I think I'm sticking with this one though!
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@abigpony What's it about I mean
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@tenmihara I'm a bit sleepy ...
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@abigpony That sounds like a comic I read once
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@tenmihara Except that I only half read it because it was confusing
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@abigpony I think I`ll pass then
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@abigpony I'm just not in the mood for depressing right now
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@abigpony I still can't understand why it's lauded as amazing and 6 is six starred. For being a RD story, she gets probably less than a page of dialogue and her characterization isn't really there at all. The one conflict in the entire story is done badly and makes the whole problem seem like they got insanely mad over just spilling a drink.
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@abigpony The biggest letdown is how little you can care about Rainbow Dash at all. The whole separation thing is supposed to be heart breaking, but how can you when all you know about her up till that point is she likes racing. I can't feel bad for someone if I don't feel like I know them. I can't deny that done better, this would legitimately be a sad story, but as it is it comes off as "I have this idea for a story, but I don't have all the details so I'll just give you the main points an you can come up with the details yourself."
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