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  1. Scott Wolf Scott Wolf

    *awaits reviews*

    Saturday, 02-Jul-11 01:57:17 UTC from web
    1. princessunoriginal princessunoriginal

      @treasurehunter That was good! I saw two spelling mistakes in all. (Main instead of mane and tho instead of though.) I'm guessing it's a ship with Derpy Hooves?

      Saturday, 02-Jul-11 01:58:05 UTC from web
      1. Scott Wolf Scott Wolf

        @princesspinkamena a little... not totally sure yet

        Saturday, 02-Jul-11 01:59:44 UTC from web
        1. princessunoriginal princessunoriginal

          @treasurehunter I lieked that part. You must, you must, YOU MUST! @moonprincess Hello

          Saturday, 02-Jul-11 02:01:38 UTC from web
    2. Milo Milo

      @treasurehunter You spelled extraordinaire wrong on the second page. One the first page, third paragraph, you said be, when its suppose to be "Me" as in you. On third page "coat and mane are" should be "coat and mane is". Your are also missing another n in "inn" at the end of the third page. I liked the story a lot. Especially the part with ditzy doo. Nice job!

      Saturday, 02-Jul-11 02:13:07 UTC from web
      1. Scott Wolf Scott Wolf

        @emperormiloth first page, third paragraph... I don't see it

        Saturday, 02-Jul-11 02:17:04 UTC from web
        1. Milo Milo

          @treasurehunter "It had stopped following be halfway" Be should be "me".

          Saturday, 02-Jul-11 02:18:22 UTC from web
          1. Scott Wolf Scott Wolf

            @emperormiloth ah. thanks ^.=.^

            Saturday, 02-Jul-11 02:19:48 UTC from web
            1. Milo Milo

              @treasurehunter the pleasure is all mine.

              Saturday, 02-Jul-11 02:23:50 UTC from web