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Why is my post not on the timeline?
Tuesday, 27-Mar-12 15:32:07 UTC from web-
@doates Did you write something offensive?
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@ceruleanspark i don't think so. Should I repost?
Tuesday, 27-Mar-12 15:33:46 UTC from web-
@doates Might as well. I just want to be sure there's nothing wrong with the timeline itself
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@ceruleanspark kay here goes. I'll let you know if it happens again.
Tuesday, 27-Mar-12 15:35:39 UTC from web-
@doates I read it. Interesting, but there are some spelling errors. All of the jumping around makes it hard to read. Add in more detail and open with a BANG, if you know what I mean.
Tuesday, 27-Mar-12 15:37:04 UTC from web-
@dlcentaur Thanks for criticism. I am a noob when it comes to fanfics, but I am a pretty good writer, just that I need a good jump start.
Tuesday, 27-Mar-12 15:40:02 UTC from web-
@doates Also, why am I unable to edit it directly? Do I have to make a new copy and then send the revisions to you? (I
Tuesday, 27-Mar-12 15:41:07 UTC from web-
Tuesday, 27-Mar-12 15:43:35 UTC from web
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@doates You are welcome (I have a bunch of Writing tips) Another thing that I wish I did when I was like you, was I wish that I used a Thesaurus. I love my Thesauruses ^-^ Finally, think about taking AP writing classes. They are hard, but you wouldn't believe how much they boost your writing abilities!
Tuesday, 27-Mar-12 15:46:57 UTC from web
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