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@foxgopher Totally bro! Actually I was on the RP site. Some of the Dark past of my O.C. has been revealed! #Anypony want to read about it???
Sunday, 29-Apr-12 07:19:20 UTC from web-
@dlcentaur I'll propably regret it but why not?
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@dlcentaur YEs. Very yes.
Sunday, 29-Apr-12 07:20:42 UTC from web-
@foxgopher @hakupony @mahvelpony Start on this one: ### Tene whirled around, snatching a dagger from his saddlebag. In an instant he had Clara pinned down, and held his blade, which was gripped in his teeth, to her neck. As soon as he saw who she was, he threw the blade aside. "Oh my gosh! I am SO sorry! Are you alright?" He asked, backing away.
Sunday, 29-Apr-12 07:26:50 UTC from web-
@dlcentaur oh fuu. I can't read it now...
Sunday, 29-Apr-12 07:27:46 UTC from web-
Sunday, 29-Apr-12 07:28:21 UTC from web
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Sunday, 29-Apr-12 07:30:02 UTC from web
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@dlcentaur I no haz time! Whaaa
Sunday, 29-Apr-12 07:30:21 UTC from web-
Sunday, 29-Apr-12 07:30:46 UTC from web
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@dlcentaur But I want toooo... UGHHHH
Sunday, 29-Apr-12 07:31:51 UTC from web
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@dlcentaur The scene turned out to be pretty cliché :)
Sunday, 29-Apr-12 07:32:51 UTC from web-
@hakupony Fairly so, yes. It's meant to start the reveal of his past. How exactly is it cliche and how can I avoid doing so in the future?
Sunday, 29-Apr-12 07:34:09 UTC from web-
Sunday, 29-Apr-12 07:36:26 UTC from web
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@dlcentaur That doesn't mean it was bad - 50% of scenes in RPGs are somewhat Clichés. However, the ovious lie about the branding, the way it i revealed and how your playpartner reacted to it was like out the playbook :)
Sunday, 29-Apr-12 07:40:14 UTC from web-
@hakupony Welp, I was going for a fairly typical response to that certain situation. In embarrassing situations I don't think there are many ways to not act cliche. Simply put, would you have reacted the same way if your darkest secret was just about to be displayed to a stranger? The circumstances called for a cliche and so I went with a cliche. I try not to be a cliche writer, though.
Sunday, 29-Apr-12 07:43:28 UTC from web-
@dlcentaur I would have reacted in quite another way, but I am not cour character :)
Sunday, 29-Apr-12 07:44:52 UTC from web-
Sunday, 29-Apr-12 07:45:31 UTC from web
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@dlcentaur After: "come on. Whatever your hiding cant be that bad." I would have reacted agressive - if I don't want to reveal my secreets, I am allergic to people tryin to talk me into it.
Sunday, 29-Apr-12 07:48:45 UTC from web-
@hakupony Ahh, ok. Tene reacted in that way because he is aggressive, but never towards those that are kind towards him. The lack of love in his life has made him very sensitive and caring in his relationships. He couldn't react violently because of his past and because of who he is. (Yes, I really do think through all of these things while posting) So, though my posts seem cliche, there is actually a Lot of thought that goes into them.
Sunday, 29-Apr-12 07:53:22 UTC from web-
@dlcentaur Clichés are not bad - as long as they are not overdosed. They make a story work.
Sunday, 29-Apr-12 07:55:08 UTC from web-
@hakupony And that's what I'm trying to avoid xD I want to be as original as I can while still allowing my readers to feel emotion and sense that Tene isn't a freak (But he's not exactly normal either)
Sunday, 29-Apr-12 07:56:22 UTC from web
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