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Made me rock! http://youtu.be/Y7az520Xl90
Thursday, 26-Jun-14 00:46:37 UTC from web-
@metaltao vist my fan fiction again and revise it plz
Thursday, 26-Jun-14 00:56:15 UTC from web-
@lunaloverchay Ok I am reading it, but, how do I edit?
Thursday, 26-Jun-14 01:00:57 UTC from web -
@lunaloverchay OKAY! Goodthing I am here, First off, decide what point of view you want, and introduce Chay as the person talking say something ALLONG the lines of "I am chase, my boring and begrudging day begins with me getting dressed in my ussual attire to begin another dull day of school..." you need to connect what you say to the events in a logical order for this point of view, lists are great, change the "i" to capitals to! :3 You are doing fantastic and I have writers blcok so I can't write things fast as you can! I am jellous to be honets.
Thursday, 26-Jun-14 01:04:20 UTC from web-
@metaltao :) i did something alittle different to it now read it
Thursday, 26-Jun-14 01:08:20 UTC from web-
@lunaloverchay OH! Ok, Um, is Chay Vroman a character that is well, bored all the time or is he well, happy all the time? Is his attitude something that is crazy? I need details, I gave an example for yout o follow! If you liked it you could use it... I had no Idea i was spot on bro but, good work? XD I am sorta baffled right now. Um lettuce see.... "That was the first time saw Luna ever since I saw her I want Princess Luna to come to me and take me to Equestria. Away from all the hate and sadness of the human world i live in." OK put an "I" between "first time" and "saw Luna" and put a comma between "saw Luna" and "ever since"
Thursday, 26-Jun-14 01:14:07 UTC from web-
@metaltao i have a kill meter it went on run on my brothers luckly i didn't kill any of them or it went to your doleed
Thursday, 26-Jun-14 01:20:46 UTC from web-
@lunaloverchay "kill meter"? WOW! How beaten up were you bro? And am I reading this correctly? XD WOW I had no idea! I am glad you are ok, I am glad you didn't hurt your family! <3
Thursday, 26-Jun-14 01:21:58 UTC from web-
@metaltao me too
Thursday, 26-Jun-14 01:22:19 UTC from web -
@metaltao enought to to start limping uh yea
Thursday, 26-Jun-14 01:22:53 UTC from web-
@lunaloverchay You hurt yourself?
Thursday, 26-Jun-14 01:25:16 UTC from web-
@metaltao no my brother
Thursday, 26-Jun-14 01:29:07 UTC from web
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@metaltao :3 " That was the first time saw..." Revide that too this "That was the first time I saw" it will make more sense :3
Thursday, 26-Jun-14 01:23:54 UTC from web
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