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http://chibithepony.deviantart.com/art/unfinished-304736324 everypony this is some of my fanfic ( it finished this is as much that has been typed so please comment on how u like it
Sunday, 27-May-12 21:27:13 UTC from web-
@chibithepony So, a basic review. The enter key is your friend, a wall of text is your enemy. It will immediately put off your reader. Don't say "5" say "five". "rainbow crash" probably needs capitals there are other examples of this elsewhere. I can read again and give some more specific feedback.
Sunday, 27-May-12 21:38:03 UTC from web-
@sarramore oh sorry that was because deviant art wouldent take word doc so i had to copy and paste... but a specific feed back on how the story goes and what could make it better would help im typing more now so yay
Sunday, 27-May-12 23:41:22 UTC from web -
@sarramore also if u wish i need a few pre readers after my friend does his edit
Sunday, 27-May-12 23:46:10 UTC from web
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