Brass Bell (brass)'s status on Sunday, 27-May-12 21:38:03 UTC
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@chibithepony So, a basic review. The enter key is your friend, a wall of text is your enemy. It will immediately put off your reader. Don't say "5" say "five". "rainbow crash" probably needs capitals there are other examples of this elsewhere. I can read again and give some more specific feedback.
