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What is up my fellow Equines??
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Wednesday, 27-Jun-12 23:05:12 UTC from web
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@cajunbrony23 CHRIIIIIIIIIIIIIIS! :D
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Wednesday, 27-Jun-12 23:06:31 UTC from web
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@cajunbrony23 incredible!
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Wednesday, 27-Jun-12 23:10:21 UTC from web
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@cajunbrony23 dunno LOL
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Wednesday, 27-Jun-12 23:12:25 UTC from web
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@cajunbrony23 sorry no skype still #hugs
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Wednesday, 27-Jun-12 23:14:50 UTC from web
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@cajunbrony23 I know I know lol
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Wednesday, 27-Jun-12 23:20:18 UTC from web
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@cajunbrony23 my mom is using all ze bandwidth
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Wednesday, 27-Jun-12 23:22:14 UTC from web
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@cajunbrony23 awwwe yeah!
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Wednesday, 27-Jun-12 23:24:02 UTC from web
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Wednesday, 27-Jun-12 23:25:15 UTC from web
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@cajunbrony23 indeed!
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@noirbatch hi there :3
Wednesday, 27-Jun-12 23:26:38 UTC from web-
@largist hey there friend! How are you??
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@noirbatch sleepy... you?
Wednesday, 27-Jun-12 23:28:57 UTC from web-
@largist incredibly amazing lol
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Wednesday, 27-Jun-12 23:28:37 UTC from web
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@cajunbrony23 what ya mean?
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@noirbatch well, I feel like I'm writeing a sh*squee*ty michle bay movie insted of an awsome indana jones story
Wednesday, 27-Jun-12 23:32:14 UTC from web-
@cajunbrony23 hmmmmmm idk maybe add more emphasis to the actual artifact
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@noirbatch not that, I mean (like in michle bays crappy movies) I'm just writeinf charcters that have as much emotione as a pice of cardbord. I feel like theres no intellgance in it at all
Wednesday, 27-Jun-12 23:35:34 UTC from web-
@cajunbrony23 not every chapter needs action. Create situations that challenge the characters at an individual standpoint. Develop their strengths, and show their weaknesses; however, do not show them at the same time unless overcoming said weakness. Have them conflict with another character even.
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Wednesday, 27-Jun-12 23:39:59 UTC from web
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@cajunbrony23 it is only 2 chapters, and try making the next few about Daring and a inner struggle or a build up to it. Like how Indy doesn't like snakes. Then he ended up in a pit full of em
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Wednesday, 27-Jun-12 23:48:13 UTC from web
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@cajunbrony23 it is only two chapters, you have time for developement still! Silly colt
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Wednesday, 27-Jun-12 23:50:06 UTC from web
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@cajunbrony23 hey! Chris! .....Relaaaaaaax
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@noirbatch ok, I have a while left to go. but I'm still afrade of write something like one of those terds called a michle bay movie
Wednesday, 27-Jun-12 23:54:05 UTC from web-
@cajunbrony23 it is your first fic. It won't be perfect. You learn from it
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Wednesday, 27-Jun-12 23:56:31 UTC from web
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@cajunbrony23 no they are not Chris. They are important, but learning from this will make your.next one better. Keep working on it. It will still be good.
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@noirbatch I hope your right, if what I fear what will happen happens, then I give up on writeing
Wednesday, 27-Jun-12 23:59:59 UTC from web-
@cajunbrony23 if you give up on it, you will only have failed yourself. Be happy you enjoy it! ^-^
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Thursday, 28-Jun-12 00:05:45 UTC from web
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@cajunbrony23 Relax. You're being overly critical of yourself.
Thursday, 28-Jun-12 00:06:23 UTC from web-
@eaglehooves if I'm not then I wont improve, I need to anilize whats wrong with it and fix them
Thursday, 28-Jun-12 00:08:32 UTC from web
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@cajunbrony23 .... Then do what I suggested silly
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@noirbatch I thought thats kinda what I was doing, I mean I made aero take a damn bullet for rarity
Thursday, 28-Jun-12 00:09:34 UTC from web-
@cajunbrony23 but you have to build up to it friend. It was good, but you nees that background story of why it meant so much.
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Thursday, 28-Jun-12 00:15:01 UTC from web
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@cajunbrony23 yesh ^-^ now I have to go to dinner take care #hugs
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Thursday, 28-Jun-12 02:48:25 UTC from web
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@cajunbrony23 Alright ill have to tell you them later as I have some work to do, sorry.
Thursday, 28-Jun-12 00:08:42 UTC from web
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@noirbatch @cajunbrony23 How many times do I need to tell you, that your fanfic is really good?
Wednesday, 27-Jun-12 23:56:38 UTC from web-
@rainbowdashepicness yes, its good, but its good like michel bay good, shure the fight sceans are cool and you want to see the hero win, but theres no intalgance or depth in it at all
Wednesday, 27-Jun-12 23:58:11 UTC from web-
@cajunbrony23 No, I think its more than that. :/
Wednesday, 27-Jun-12 23:59:29 UTC from web-
@rainbowdashepicness explan it then
Thursday, 28-Jun-12 00:00:57 UTC from web-
@cajunbrony23 Alright, I think It does have great action scenes, You have also put quite a into the characters personality's and, it has good suspense scenes.
Thursday, 28-Jun-12 00:04:21 UTC from web-
@rainbowdashepicness ok, explan the charcters personalites
Thursday, 28-Jun-12 00:04:51 UTC from web-
@cajunbrony23 This might take awhile then one sec.
Thursday, 28-Jun-12 00:05:21 UTC from web
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@cajunbrony23 Chris you need a carebear stare LOL.
Wednesday, 27-Jun-12 23:52:01 UTC from web-
@rainbowdashepicness dont patronize me
Wednesday, 27-Jun-12 23:55:13 UTC from web
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@cajunbrony23 You know Cajun some people are trying to talk to you on skype... XD
Wednesday, 27-Jun-12 23:14:05 UTC from web-
@rainbowdashepicness waaaaaaaaa
Wednesday, 27-Jun-12 23:15:22 UTC from web-
@cajunbrony23 Chris.... I meant were still trying to talk to you on skype (Me and Marsh)
Wednesday, 27-Jun-12 23:16:47 UTC from web-
@rainbowdashepicness I know, so call me
Wednesday, 27-Jun-12 23:17:22 UTC from web
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@woona no mas lonely for you *glomp* ^-^ I am awesome! Thank you
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@woona just being all wooo! Idk XD
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@woona wellllllllllllllllllll... You kin skype me if you ever feel lonely... Except right now I has no wifi. I know it isn't the same but, it is sumthin ^-^
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Wednesday, 27-Jun-12 23:20:43 UTC from web
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