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  1. Stephanny - Admin Stephanny - Admin

    Hello, every pony! @nvrrmbr I read your story finally.

    Friday, 03-Jun-11 23:24:18 UTC from web
    1. Jonathan Burgess Jonathan Burgess

      @sprinkles And... What did you think of it?

      Friday, 03-Jun-11 23:25:10 UTC from StatusNet iPhone
    2. Milo Milo

      @sprinkles I want without sprinkles, I mean Hiya Sprinkles, how are things going?

      Friday, 03-Jun-11 23:26:11 UTC from web
      1. Stephanny - Admin Stephanny - Admin

        @nvrrmbr Well you need to work on a writing skill known as "show not tell". Here's a link: http://foremostpress.com/authors/articles/show_not_tell.html

        Friday, 03-Jun-11 23:27:22 UTC from web
        1. Stephanny - Admin Stephanny - Admin

          @sprinkles Not finished! Anyhow. I know that you're a beginner, so that's ok. Just keep writing. That's the most important part. <3

          Friday, 03-Jun-11 23:28:00 UTC from web
        2. Jonathan Burgess Jonathan Burgess

          @sprinkles Yeah, hardware limitations. I wrote it entirely on the Itouch that I'm using right now. I had to stay within length restrictions, so I had to make it Very Very short.

          Friday, 03-Jun-11 23:29:18 UTC from StatusNet iPhone