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@coreywwilliams Seriously, they're brilliant.
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@coreywwilliams Whoa, wait, you write those? People love those!
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@coreywwilliams Glad to be of service
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@coreywwilliams Thanks for letting me read it ahead of time =P
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@coreywwilliams Glad to be of assistance; I've loved the story from the word go. Feel free to hit me up again in the future ^^
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@coreywwilliams I liked it; not too sappy, but enough to provoke a bit of d'aww. And Harpo amuses me greatly
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@coreywwilliams All done. That was terrific =D
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@coreywwilliams Most welcome
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@coreywwilliams "Frédéric: But, regardless of that, I still persisted. I wrote music all the time, sometimes staying up all night to do so. Whenever I thought of quitting, I thought of Harpo. How long did he work on his? How many sleepless nights had he had? I wanted to think he slaved as hard as I did ... but my greatest fewar was that it all came easy to him. What if it came easy to all those with talent? I didn’t know, I was just a child ... I was afraid that I was working so hard for something I could not achieve ... and that I was nothing but a fool. But I was more afraid of quitting." 'Fewar' isn't a word; fear is =P
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@coreywwilliams That's cool; work takes priority
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@coreywwilliams Glad to be of help
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@coreywwilliams Glad to hear it; just wasn't sure since you didn't respond. You're also welcome to counter my critiques if you feel the need =P
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@coreywwilliams "Harpo: [Says nothing. Nods.] DJ-P0n3: Riveting." Nothing wrong here, I just love that XD
Friday, 20-Jan-12 17:16:37 UTC from web -
@coreywwilliams "DJ-P0n3: Yes exactly, that’s how it works!" I feel that 'Yes, that's exactly how it works!' might sound better
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@coreywwilliams DJ-P0n3: "Hurray, that means I win by default! But anyway, I figure since I’ve been helping the ensemble more, I figure it’s appropriate we have a proper interview with the other members of Octavia’s quartet. Trust me, with all of our powers combined, we’re gonna be big. Bigger than cheesy pizza crust! Let’s bring them!" Feels like there should be an 'in' at the end of the last sentence (Let's bring them in)
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@coreywwilliams "DJ-P0n3: That depends. Have (a) won an acting award yet?" 'a' should be 'I' here
Friday, 20-Jan-12 17:08:58 UTC from web -
@coreywwilliams 'Octavia: And she’s a gigantic hammy unicorn who seems to crave (from) any attention from everypony?' Extra 'From' in this line, marked with brackets
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@coreywwilliams I'm in!
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@coreywwilliams rockin
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@coreywwilliams not mch wassup with you?
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@coreywwilliams it says in your profile that you like fantasy and horror books. Have you, by chance, heard of the author "Robert Lipaurlo"? He writes those kinds of books. I highly recommend his books!
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@coreywwilliams Yay! can't wait for it!
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@coreywwilliams that's my name
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@coreywwilliams cool dude ill check it out later
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@coreywwilliams oh you write fanfics
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@coreywwilliams eeyup what are you doing ?
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@coreywwilliams im just at my friends house gonba have a brony meet up tomorrow
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@coreywwilliams Well that's cool. Trixie is the best pony after all.
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@coreywwilliams im only trixie because !ericb is trixie. kindof. im warming up to her, actually.
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@coreywwilliams I love your picture.