Cyrus Duong (keyreaper)'s status on Monday, 19-Mar-12 18:37:35 UTC
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@doates Just finished you're story if you're still on here. I'm writing up in the comments now. In short I think the story has great potential but was much to quick paced and wreckless. Too much was said and done in 6,000 words without enough detail. This would be a great story if a structure was well built up and chapters had been split up into sections of your revenge. Other than that, I enjoyed the idea of the alternate universe being in your hands to save it.
