Jordan Cameron (tenmihara)'s status on Friday, 26-Aug-11 04:10:25 UTC
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@redenchilada Actually I'm not too surprised. Nyx had some rather unfortunate mary-sueishness to her prior to the big revision overhaul. As well I could nitpick some of the grammar and spelling. Ultimately though I found to an enjoyable read. Parts of chapter 18 bugged me though