Jordan Cameron (tenmihara)'s status on Monday, 26-Sep-11 05:59:03 UTC

  1. Jordan Cameron Jordan Cameron

    @knoxemerald So, first thing I'm noticing is that you do something I've been called out on for a few times before. You tend to repeat the same words (excluding things like 'it', 'the' and 'a') within the same phrases. For example, this sentence: "The quiet atmosphere of the library was abruptly and temporarily destroyed by Twilight's hasty entrance (into the library)" The part I put in brackets is somewhat redundant, as you already established that Twilight was entering the library

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