madington flavors (madflavors)'s status on Friday, 11-Nov-11 19:31:43 UTC
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@tenmihara HEY! I'm so sorry for not getting back to you any sooner on your second chapter. I thought it was awesome. I think there were maybe a few grammatical hiccups here and there but certainly nothing major. The story is solid and The introduction of May's character was very well executed. I definitely look forward to more.
