Thomas (twitch)'s status on Monday, 16-Jan-12 05:34:40 UTC
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@theawesomepinkpony I Just finished watching your latest Brony TV EP. Not bad, I love the Idea, and you can really take this somewhere ... Don't take it the wrong way(don't kill me... please), but touch of constructive Improvement for future EP's (coming from a Brony who had a hell of a time with this in speech class) Take out the ummm,s (I counted 74) and the basically's (60). It will add a lot to the look and sound of the review. also just an idea. As you give the description you can spice it up a bit by inserting some commentary if you like( What you thought about that, how it helped the plot ETC.) The ummm's were just a touch distracting.
