@lightningcrash
Hamilton, Ohio
A lone pony trots along an empty dusty road. His wings furled back against his sides, he pushes on as the wind whips dirt into his face. He quests for two things: his purpose in life and a pony to share his heart with.
More details...Notices by Crash (lightningcrash), page 131
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@jinny Yeah. I'm not exactly on the rich side either. Silly middle class. But I've got it much better than many others do, and I'm grateful for it.
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@tinwhistle Feel free to join in the convo. Me and @jinny always like extra company. ;)
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@jinny Ummm.... No fetishes here. I think. Haven't really tried to explore that area.
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@thelastgherkin What's wrong mate? Let's turn that hash-brown upside down!
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Howdy ho. What's up @theawesomepony ?
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@jinny Tis true. Not been able to talk with you in... over 20 hours!! This must be corrected!
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@jinny I wish it were clear here. It'd make my last high school soccer match at home all that much better.
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@mrdragon Ah. But I only have so much time with yall. And once I go Air Force, I don't think I'll have much time to myself.
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@jinny It's rainy and muggy here in Ohio... Got lightning crashing (heh heh) all around and thunder and whatnot.
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@mrdragon *hip check* Psh. I could care less about school. I would so much rather be with yall.
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@mrdragon Hello again!! Sorry we had all of five seconds earlier.
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It's advisory!! I totally forgot. Which means I've got an extra half hour of computer time to spend with all of you!! ^.^
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@rhetoricalpony BTW, if Twilight is based off of Dr. Halsey (which she seems to be), don't forget that Cortana was the AI of Dr. Halsey. That's a good idea with RBD, and it can set up a scene where maybe RBD causes somepony to get hurt, and maybe that will get her to focus and forgive... or something. Rarity or Fshy would be good ones to kill off in New Ponyville though.
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@rhetoricalpony Okay. Well, do you think you'll be on in about 4 hours? I need to start heading to class... Hopefully I can supply more ideas during my lunch and computer class.
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@mrdragon Morning, and sadly, farewell. My time in the library before school begins is almost up.
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@rhetoricalpony Okay... So Twiliight Sparkle is basicly the Covenent's mane focus? Hmmm..... Maybe we can mesh both of our ideas... Try taking it with my idea, because it really doesn't change your opening scene that much. Once they get to the ground, have them do the whole "rescue the squad" thing. Then after the fray is done, have like a surprised meeting between Twi & AJ. Start to leak information about the past from there, little questions from Apple Jack or something like that to get Twilight to explain some of it. Maybe slowly get the remainder of the mane six slowly back together, making it the only way to stave off the Covenent. Kind of put that irony in where Twi must do exactly the opposite of what she wanted. I'm sure you'll do what's right for your fic, though.
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@remembernovember I am always prepared for a good duel, be it with word or pen or blade. The battle of minds in a never ending match is the list I enjoy most. It keeps me sharp without harming others. Helps me to stay vigilant against the evils of the world that might do my friends harm.
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@rhetoricalpony Go right ahead. Was just throwing out ideas. I guess you plan to go over grammer and spelling after you've finished writing the thing?
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@remembernovember It is morning where I be. And I had yet to greet you. So there. :)
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@dezzierose Good mornin to you.
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@zach121k @remembernovember Morning to you two.
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@rhetoricalpony Alright... Okay. I've got an idea or two for you. Let's kind of change the setting first. Place it in a battle outside of one of the colonies. So not only could you expand on the rescue, but you would also set up what would occur next... Have something go wrong with the escape (possible part 2 title). Maybe someone gets injured along the way or something. But make it so their route of exit is blocked or somehow no longer an option. Force the squad down onto the colony below, where the covenent are already staging a planet-scale invasion. Maybe have the beleagured squad meet up with more troops, a squad that's under heavy fire (under command of Apple Jack??). Try taking it from there.
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@rhetoricalpony Alright, gave it a good read... I'm assuming you've played Halo: ODST and watched Halo Legends?
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@fallinwinter How might you be today?
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@rhetoricalpony I may be able to assist you, if you trust me to. Although I lack the experience in fanfics (and writing stories in general), those few stories that I have conveyed have been applauded by both my (English) teachers and peers alike. And I've considerable expertise with halo.
