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I'm halfway through writing a draft of something and I can tell it's crap and I can tell where I need to go back and elaborate, but I'm torn because I want to reach the end first. :/
Thursday, 28-Aug-14 16:53:04 UTC from web-
@thelastgherkin I think it helps to finish first, because you might uncover new ways to fix things.
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@scribus You're one of them writer types. I've written myself into a corner. I'm dead set on presenting the surviving soldiers in a unit in a court martial setting, each telling a different version of the battle that got them there. My problem is that I want to flesh out some of the redshirts, but I don't know if doing that would be pointless given that I've established them as already dead.
Thursday, 28-Aug-14 17:08:31 UTC from web-
@thelastgherkin Sort of a Rashomon thing, then? I think that fleshing out redshirts can help with emotional connection and stuff. I can't think of any examples off the top of my head but I know I've seen things where I know someone dies, and I know their time is coming up, and I still really ache for them to make it because I've become attached
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@scribus I'm also not sure how to do that without laying it on too thick. Somewhere between "last day before retirement" and "you'll be the death of me".
Thursday, 28-Aug-14 17:26:59 UTC from web-
@thelastgherkin Yeah, that I'm not so sure I'm good with, myself.... TV Tropes has ruined my life.
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@thelastgherkin I suppose if you just make them "real" and sympathetic to the reader, you don't need to go with either extreme.
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@scribus Maaaaaan. Writing.
Thursday, 28-Aug-14 18:08:24 UTC from web-
@thelastgherkin I know, right?
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