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  1. Narwhal Narwhal

    Here's another quick marker sketch, a little rough around the edges but fun nonetheless http://rainbowdash.net/attachment/815210

    Wednesday, 31-Dec-14 07:56:58 UTC from MuSTArDroid
    1. Rarity Rarity

      @northernnarwhal holy what that's gdlk

      Wednesday, 31-Dec-14 07:57:47 UTC from web
      1. Narwhal Narwhal

        @rarity Oh, thanks

        Wednesday, 31-Dec-14 07:58:30 UTC from web
        1. Rarity Rarity

          @northernnarwhal off the top of my head, her right eye seems to be drifting, her index finger is thin and the weird shading on her collarbone is, well weird, but for a quick sketch that's still fkin amazing

          Wednesday, 31-Dec-14 08:00:59 UTC from web
          1. Narwhal Narwhal

            @rarity The collarbone seems alright, but I can definitely see what you mean with the eye. Well, I thought the left one was a little odder than the right one.

            Wednesday, 31-Dec-14 08:03:12 UTC from web
            1. Rarity Rarity

              @northernnarwhal well I'm no artist so :P

              Wednesday, 31-Dec-14 08:03:34 UTC from web
              1. Narwhal Narwhal

                @rarity Yeah, but you're entitled to criticism and your impression of work.

                Wednesday, 31-Dec-14 08:04:39 UTC from web
                1. Rarity Rarity

                  @northernnarwhal I think my problem with the collarbone is that the shading isn't smooth into her left arm. if the lighting is from the upper left of the frame it makes sense for the collarbone to be lit up, but I feel like that would transition into her arm as well

                  Wednesday, 31-Dec-14 08:06:11 UTC from web
                  1. Narwhal Narwhal

                    @rarity No, the lighting there is fine. Her hand and chin go over that area due to the perspective so there should be shading there, it's just the right arm should be a bit brighter with the exception of the top of the sweater which would slip out of the middleground.

                    Wednesday, 31-Dec-14 08:12:12 UTC from web
                    1. Rarity Rarity

                      @northernnarwhal damn I didn't take into consideration the other arm blocking light. I'm a scrub

                      Wednesday, 31-Dec-14 08:12:41 UTC from web
                      1. Narwhal Narwhal

                        @rarity But yeah, her right side should be a bit brighter.

                        Wednesday, 31-Dec-14 08:13:23 UTC from web
                        1. Narwhal Narwhal

                          @northernnarwhal Her right being the viewer's left

                          Wednesday, 31-Dec-14 08:13:34 UTC from web
    2. Rarity Rarity

      @northernnarwhal I mean the anatomy isn't perfect but it has a really nice... art feel if that makes sense.

      Wednesday, 31-Dec-14 07:59:39 UTC from web
      1. Narwhal Narwhal

        @rarity Yeah, a bit of it was freehanded so the anatomy was a little off. It's really just a sketch anyway.

        Wednesday, 31-Dec-14 08:00:22 UTC from web
    3. Someone Probably Someone Probably

      @northernnarwhal Overall I like it. The only thing I really notice is the left eye.

      Wednesday, 31-Dec-14 08:06:02 UTC from web
      1. Narwhal Narwhal

        @eeeie It's really only an uneven line there below the reflection in the eye that's bothering me but I sort of fixed it

        Wednesday, 31-Dec-14 08:12:48 UTC from web