That wierd guy next door (maverick)'s status on Sunday, 15-Apr-12 05:41:00 UTC

  1. @crusader8 Okay. In that case, just put a hook closer to the beginning. Either something that is good on its own, or that will compliment the actual hook later. That way you can keep the description, but relate the reader to the story nice and quickly.

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