That wierd guy next door (maverick)'s status on Sunday, 15-Apr-12 06:06:09 UTC
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@crusader8 it's not bad at all. And from what I see, it would depend on the readers mood. Just saying, add a little razzle dazzle to the beginning. Like I was saying before. Add a tiny D'wwaaaa moment, but something that will use the readers imagination and put Twi in their imagination rather than "she is feeling very happy". That should seal the deal.
