Crusader 8 (princelypublictimeline)'s status on Sunday, 15-Apr-12 06:16:37 UTC
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@renovatedkitchen I'm about to be brilliant! Do the CMC part first. Maybe. The drawback is there won't be an immediate hook to the overall novella's conflict, but there would be more razzle and dazzle. I'm tempted to just have it the way it is but have that stuff she tries with a letter coming via Spike, to introduce a sudden change and surprise from what was previously happy-go-lucky. Kind of like episode 3 of season 2, she's all hunky dory until she realizes she hasn't learned anything in friendship. Then the switch flips. Would that work better?
