RedEnchilada (notice the lack of a space) (redenchilada)'s status on Monday, 23-Jul-12 20:34:53 UTC
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@applekoar The head is off. The bridge of the snout should curve up to more of a 90-degree angle, and the point at the tip should be rounded a bit more. The eyes are a tad small and the near one (right from our view) should be a bit closer to the other one. The ear should be at least twice as big as it is now. And another thing to keep in mind for the whole picture is to loosen up your lines a bit. Let the legs curve a bit, get wider at the bottom, and just concentrate on how the whole thing flows. Aside from that, it looks like a really good first picture, and I'm seeing a lot of potential!
